躺在冷圈的拔妹

冷番同人小说写手
目前专注流浪地球的坑里
想要参加cp30(所以重新捡起lof)

hannibal剧本 s101(4)

FWUM.  

The PENDULUM swings across the stained carpet lifting the blood.  

钟摆摇晃在被弄脏的地毯上,血正在消散。

FWUM.  

The PENDULUM swings across the blood spattered SECURITY KEY PAD and the rust-colored dried drops vanish.  

钟摆摇摆在溅在家庭安全平板(?),然后锈迹斑斑的血滴消失了。

FWUM.

(NOTE: The PENDULUM is a stylistic device, our REVERSE METRONOME rewinding Will to a TIME BEFORE THEMURDERS.)

(笔记:钟摆是一钟修辞手法,我们的反向节拍器使Will倒回到谋杀案发生之前。)

The crime scene has now been decriminalized in Will’s mind.

犯罪场景现在在Will脑海中重现。

Will Graham opens his eyes and stands, turns and walks BACKWARDS toward the front door (which shows signs of a violent forced entry), opening it behind him, back-stepping outside before closing it again.

WillGraham睁开双眼站在那里,然后转身并走回前门(前面有暴力的强行进入的痕迹),打开之后反向递推来到关闭它之前的外面。  

CAMERA REVEALS THE DOOR IS NOW PRISTINE, PRE-FORCED ENTRY.

相机显示门现在是最初的,未被强行闯入的。

2     EXT. HOME - NIGHT -CONTINUOUS - WILL’S P.O.V.              2

Will walks backward out the front door, across the lawn, over thesidewalk. 

Will走回前面,穿过草坪,走到人行道。


生词:

stained carpet:脏了的地毯

rust-colored:锈色的

stylistic device:修辞手法

reverse metronome:反向节拍器

decriminalize:使合法化

back-stepping:反向递推

pristine:最初的

lawn:草坪

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